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Post 24: How I made my post 3 better

My original post 3 was okay but it was a little bleak and lazy. I didn't really give any real tips on how to maintain a professional online image. One thing that I fixed is that I introduced my source properly. In the original I introduced the quote as "In the article "10 Tips For Maintaining a Professional Image Online" by Nathan Chandler". This gives little to no authority to the quote and makes you question it's credibility. So I went deeper into the website to actually find this man and what he did and re-introduced it as "According to Nathan Chandler, a 10 year expert in consumer tech,". This offered more authority and credibility to my quote because know my readers know what he does and that he would have accurate information about consumers and professional images. I also got rid of the scenario in the beginning on my post to make it seem more informative and less fun.

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  1. Bryan A. FriasApril 14, 2018 at 3:57 PM

    Great post! That was a good that you make your post 3 new version more authority and credible; credibility is very important for writer and blogger.

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