Post 16: Analyzing Cloud Tweaks' Posts

The post I will be analyzing the outline and arrangement from Cloud Tweaks is "Will Artificial Intelligence Impact Jobs" written by Allan Leinwand. This article uses a problem and solution outline. For every paragraph, Leindwand states the problem or complaint that society has once stated about Artificial Intelligence and then introduces the solution that Artificial Intelligence could provide and how much better it could be. Also throughout the entire article Leindwand uses logical comparisons between Hamilton and Artificial Intelligence. Leinwand introduces the Hamilton quotes and then breaks it down to apply it to his stance on Artificial Intelligence. This gives the readers a clear view of what stance he holds and understand the point he is trying to get across.

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Post 2: L. Lennie Irvin's 7 Myths of Academic Writing: Is It The Truth?

Are these myths bias or are they true? In Irvin's essay, "What Is “Academic” Writing?" he outlined and debunked 7 myths that most high school and college students were made to believe as they evolved as writers. The Myths Are: Myth #1: The “Paint by Numbers” myth Myth #2: Writers only start writing when they have everything figured out Myth #3: Perfect first drafts Myth #4: Some got it; I don’t—the genius fallacy Myth #5: Good grammar is good writing Myth #6: The Five Paragraph Essay Myth #7: Never use “I” Most of these myth's I have personally never heard of but I just can't agree with myth #1. The myth is described as "writers believe they must perform certain steps in a particular order to write “correctly.” Rather than being a lock-step linear process,-". Maybe it's just me being stubborn but I've always been taught to follow an evidence triangle or some type of layout when I wrote essays and it made it a little more easier an...

Post 25: Did the Peer Review Process help me?

The peer review process was a big help to me. I have always been taught to take constructive criticism as a blessing even if I don't agree with what they have told me. It allowed me to get a view of how others received my paper and if it was effective or not. Sometimes I would get comments telling me that I had them hooked the entire time and that I had a good paper but other times I would get comments telling me to change 'this', add a comma, get rid of this sentence, or that I had a weak argument and vocabulary. Honestly it made me feel good when people would tell me those things because they aren't telling me these things to hurt me but to help me. Telling me that my paper is good is not constructive and won't help. peer reviews also gave me a chance to see how others write and to use their writing styles to improve my own. Seeing the mistakes or the flow of the other students papers allowed me to make out the do's and don'ts for my own paper.

Post 23: Remake of my Post 3

Building Your Online Image Have you ever thought about how much information you post about yourself on the internet? You reveal parts of yourself through pictures, text posts, and tagged photos whether you realize that or not. The way you display your self online can have both a positive and negative effect on your image. Anyone can put your name in the google search bar and find out what they want about you. According to Nathan Chandler, a 10 year expert in consumer tech, "People who initially find you on the Internet have only that content by which to judge you."(1) Your future employer or customers would have access to see all your posts whether the post are good or bad and make biased assumptions of you before they have even gotten the chance to meet you in the real world. You could lose your job opportunity and some money. Chandler also mentions that if you are to be a professional at anything that you do, never post anything negative. Keep your p...

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